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The Hidden Flame, Page 37

posted 6th Mar 2012, 12:00 AM

The Hidden Flame, Page 37
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6th Mar 2012, 12:00 AM

Martin F.

Sareena and Misty don't take kindly to interfering in fights unless they're the ones doing it.

Really, one problem I have with this sequence as the author is that Ozias and Lara haven't really come off as huge threats. If anything Sareena and Misty have just been hanging back letting them get away with things so that John can have his fun - something I should watch for in the future, I guess.

Still, am happy with how the fight itself has played out. Little more left to go on it.

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6th Mar 2012, 5:56 AM

Adam C.

Ozais was fun enough to draw so I'd say he was neat to me.

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