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The Hidden Flame, Page 38

posted 10th Mar 2012, 12:00 AM

The Hidden Flame, Page 38
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10th Mar 2012, 12:00 AM

Adam C.

'Fraid I don't have much to say on this page... Is a fight scene and all. I did like doing the flame effects in the background, at least.

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10th Mar 2012, 1:21 PM

Martin F.

This more or less marks the end of the fight scene. Given most of my thoughts on that and how it could've been improved already but still, think this has been a decent sequence. And I do like getting to show Misty in a bit more of a combat situation, even if only short term - think a little too much has gone into making her comic relief so far.

Also funny how Sareena barely did anything in this fight. She pretty much carried every fight before this so it makes sense to write it that way, but still kind of odd.

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