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98.9: The Ride, Page 3

posted 29th Jun 2012, 11:00 PM

98.9: The Ride, Page 3
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29th Jun 2012, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Again, not much to say on this. ^^ Do love the first two panels with the extremely frantic "KNOCKNOCKNOCKKNOCK" and Sareena's nightgown.

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30th Jun 2012, 8:53 PM

Martin F.

I really like how this whole scene came out. Think Abe really knocked it out of the park with making Jake very animated and excitable, which really helps to bring some early life to a character we haven't seen much of yet.

Like to imagine that in the third panel that's said pretty lightning fast. What the expressions on her and Sareena suggest and all - not really how I pictured it when scripting it but much funnier this way, and fits with the quick wall of text.

Here are Abe's comments -

There are some things in drama that defy the laws of magic or emotion, I like to call it the Mood Slime Effect. If you ever watched Ghostbusters 2, that's where Egon was working on a theory about how human emotions effect the environment. I thought it was only fitting seeing as the first one had Peter testing out ESP abilities on negative reinforcement, had he done without bias he might have been onto something. Anyway, that's why I always love it when the background gets a little bright or there's hearts or when a spooky vibe sorta oozes out into the air, etc. One things for certain you can imagine why the other person would feel if they saw that visual."

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