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98.9: The Ride, Page 11

posted 27th Jul 2012, 11:00 PM

98.9: The Ride, Page 11
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27th Jul 2012, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

This one's pretty text-heavy, but most of it's just building up Jake's job more than anything. Took me a little to bit to kind of get in the hang of writing her addressing the public properly, but mostly happy with the end results.

Might be sort of an awkward scene change only to change right back, though. Kind of mostly used the radio thing as a transition at this point, both into the next part of the Hearst and Raymond plot as well as to get the set-up out of the way for when Sareena and Misty chime in, plus it makes sense that there might be something of Jake's show overheard by Hearst in the mall, so happy with the execution personally.

Here's what Abe has to say -

And once again we see the same room we saw on the cover, abide with more people in it. Just look at Jake go, it's like the coat on here chair holds back her true stripes or something like that. One thing, I wonder is how a radio would be playing on an intercom, unless it's one of those things that's tied into a radio station so they don't have no control who knows. That or maybe it's from a nearby stores that sells electronics who knows. As for Raymond, I decided to go with a part form part casual look. Although with his uniform coat I can't help but feel like he either reminds me of a urban cowboy or one of those bad-ass characters you find a man high school drama, you know that ones that where their coats at the shoulders or something. A great stock character for the harden street fighter type but I think Raymond would be a bit to mild for that sorta of work, who knows.

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