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98.9: The Ride, Page 18

posted 20th Aug 2012, 11:00 PM

98.9: The Ride, Page 18
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20th Aug 2012, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Not much for me to say here- just submitting for Martin and Abe. Do like the background panels, of course.

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20th Aug 2012, 11:54 PM

Martin F.

Y'know, don't think it was intentional but seems like WaR and BP both get their current chapters really rolling at around the same point. Kind of neat.

Like the flashback quite a bit. Abe has a bit more to say about that, though, so see his comments for that.

Definitely suggest sticking around as the chapter gets moving. Really liked writing this one, plus a character's about to debut who will be very much important to both WaR and BP moving forward.

Here's what Abe has to say -

My favorite part is the miniature flashback panels we have that are brownish color. It was a simple mix of black and white and then fading a brown panel to make all that black and white and gray look like a sepia tone. Funny story is that the bag was supposed to appear in Page 8, but I'd forgotten to add that detail. So instead I suggested a reconnection in this panel. That's when you realize that something is definitely to be afraid of. I just hope that everybody realizes that they're still in the studio due to lack of background on my part. It just seems that more time and focus should be spend on the dialogue then fancy backgrounds. Or you could just say that I was lazy.

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