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98.9: The Ride, Page 42

posted 23rd Nov 2012, 11:00 PM

98.9: The Ride, Page 42
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23rd Nov 2012, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

Yeah, another pretty talky page here. This marks the end of the Sareena and Raymond conversation at least - come Tuesday we'll be seeing things take a different direction for the last three pages of the chapter.

As usual for when things get really talky not a whole lot to say about this page itself, but do like getting to tie things back into the last chapter. Wow, has been over six months since the particular scene this is calling back to. Kind of mindblowing, that.

Yeah, fortunately, I can assure you the next chapter will be far shorter than this one and The Hidden Flame. Not quite as short as Confidentiality by any means, but we had a lot of ground to cover and with those out of the way I want to try and pick up the pace of the story of both WaR and BP a bit. Going to try to avoid going into the 40s on the page count again for awhile.

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24th Nov 2012, 3:41 AM

Adam C.

This was just after my tabelt was back online and thankfully the headcount for this batch of pages was really low. Which was good since I had a lot of stuff to deal with that week. This whole semester has been a pretty heavy load, glad it's almost over.

Y'know, it's weird looking at the text balloons here and in WaR. In Blues, we've already transitioned into these off-gray text balloons that fit in better with the coloring on the page. These pure-white balloons are really weird to look at now. Martin's idea to transition, of course.

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