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Ghosts in the Attic, Page 18

posted 15th Feb 2013, 11:00 PM

Ghosts in the Attic, Page 18
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15th Feb 2013, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

If you missed it, we posted something for Black Princess's second anniversary on Thursday. Not crucial, but if you want a little preview of some things to come over the next year, you might want to take a look at it.

Y'know, weird thing I just realized, WaR / BP and Blues are set to end their current chapters in the same week. Kind of funny, and unlikely given Blues is written separately and usually runs longer.

Anyway, yeah, this page is pretty wordy. Still, I'm pretty happy with the sequence to come, and do think it was kind of unavoidable. Some things I needed to address here, like explaining a bit more in the way of the Alex / Dorothy / Sareena situation, particularly here within BP where it's not received as much time to explain as it maybe should. Pretty satisfied with how this sequence handles it.

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16th Feb 2013, 2:29 AM

Adam C.

Huh. Odd. Especially the Blues details, that's never really in sync with anybody else. Maybe I could do a filler with a bunch of the characters all resting up for the next round. ^^

But yeah, not a lot to say on this one myself. Art's straightforward and the dialog I've got nothing to do with. Heh... I did do a Joke Page around this one though, mainly poking fun at how Alex could still be an atheist when he's just witnessed proof of the human soul and afterlife. After discussing it with Martin, he explained he's more the type who doesn't care much on the subject one way or the other.

Though the question about Dorothy living in Sareena's mind is an interesting one. We'll be getting more into that as the chapter goes on. ^^

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16th Feb 2013, 2:30 PM

Wolfintina

Alex can't ruin Dorothy's image which is why he comes home and then just slips out Dorothy's bedroom window to do work as Starchild.

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17th Feb 2013, 9:25 PM

Martin F.

Pretty much, yeah. WaR will soon be coming up on some more specific thoughts of his on Dorothy soon.

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