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Ghosts in the Attic, Page 23

posted 4th Mar 2013, 11:00 PM

Ghosts in the Attic, Page 23
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4th Mar 2013, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

This page I'm kind of iffy on. Not for the quality of it, pretty happy with the page itself. Get some good back-and-forth between Alex and Laura, and some set-up for a point we'll be coming back to soon enough in WaR...

But this page doesn't really actually have much to do with BP. Kind of decided to go with it mostly because their end of the plot did deserve some wrap-up, and it serves as a good transition into where things go with Sareena and Misty from here as we're getting a scene change.

It just does feel like it's kind of cheating, y'know? Ah well, it happens I guess, plus Laura is going to be in the next BP chapter so it doesn't hurt to give her a little extra screentime first.

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5th Mar 2013, 1:56 PM

Adam C.

The thing we're leading up to in WaR that's alluded to here is that Laura is a spooner. She doesn't want to share a bed with Alex because she'll line up beside him and start whispering her secret feelings into his ear.

Yeah, not a lot to say on this page myself. Interior car shots can be a pain for me, but they seem to come out alright.... I've got no problem with Alex and Laura getting more screentime in this comic, mainly since we've actually seen very little of them together so far. That's going to change I think, since Laura is gonna get more focus in the future, but nice to see it here.

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5th Mar 2013, 3:08 PM

Wolfintina

In Martins DA posted stories involving these two it reveals Laura sleeps in the nude(among other things)and that seems a good reason to be nervous if those are Laura's in canon sleeping habits.

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5th Mar 2013, 5:01 PM

Martin F.

Heh, right. We'll be bringing that up properly a little bit down the line.

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