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A Time For Play, Page 8

posted 27th May 2013, 11:00 PM

A Time For Play, Page 8
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27th May 2013, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

When I wrote this page, I was picturing the transformation being a more gradual sort of thing with us kind of seeing it fade between how the three were in the previous panel and how they are now. Given this page was pretty time-consuming in the first place, I'm glad Adam didn't actually go that route with it. Probably would've looked better though.

We'll be sticking through this plot for the next few days, which is kind of funny since the last panel here does feel like it's ushering in a scene-change. And I guess technically it is, because we'll still be jumping to a short time later in the next page.

As for Candice's powers... Yeah, realize those seem to kind of lend themselves to some liberties in how far they go with editing clothes. There is something of an explanation for that, but it'll come when we explain where people like her, John, and Firefly get their powers. Not sure when that explanation will be, probably not too far off; the answer's not too relevant to much anyway, it's just sort of explanation.

I like how over-the-top Laura tends to be in her reactions to things. Might be the actress in her shining through. Speaking of, we'll be getting to see that over the next couple of pages.

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28th May 2013, 7:53 AM

Adam C.

Heheh... Yeah, didn't get that sense at all. ^^ Sorry; probably would've looked pretty neat. Maybe when they change back, assuming we see that, we'll get that. And as for Laura being freaked out over the transformation; that's what was in the script.

Still do love a lot of touches to this page, especially the Pikachu on Misty's shirt becoming a Pichu and Sareena frowning at her reduced chest in the second panel. Page really was sort of time-consuming for me, since I had to work extra hard to get the heights and proportions right. Gotten easier as we go into the storyline, though.

I get the feeling this page'll have a lot of new followers, but that thought makes me a tad bitter, not helped by my current mood.

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28th May 2013, 2:15 PM

Wolfintina

Um, guys this is marked as page 10, not page 8. Laura's reaction is extremely amusing and how old are they supposed to be?

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28th May 2013, 3:46 PM

Adam C.

Fixed it. ^^ Thanks for pointing that out.

As for ages... Candice says in the next page that she's two years younger than she normally is, which would make her six. Wanna say Misty is roundabout the same. Think Sareena is either four or five.

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28th May 2013, 11:22 PM

Martin F.

Candice's age isn't actually said for a few more pages, not in the next one, but yeah, Adam pretty much got it right there. Thanks for the heads-up on the page number, not sure how that happened.

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