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A Time For Play, Page 24

posted 2nd Sep 2013, 11:00 PM

A Time For Play, Page 24
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2nd Sep 2013, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

First off, don't forget to swing back by on Saturday for this month's bonus page. We have six pages left to go in this chapter, and that one will knock it down to five and clear up a mystery that's been hanging in the air for a little bit to boot.

Okay, as for this page then. . . This wraps up the Erac Day scene. Yeah, like I've mentioned a couple times now, he didn't really get a lot of screentime in this chapter. He will get another appearance before it ends, but still, this is all we see of him interacting with our heroes for the time being.

Happy with the page, though. It also ties the page back into what has happened recently in Wright as Rayne with White Noise showing up there; we'll be going a little further into that here soon enough. This page also is kind of a demonstration of something the story will probably come back to a fair bit as things go, that Misty's main investment in situations is just sticking by Sareena's side; that will be kind of a recurring motif as we go forward.

I should really figure out how to approach the stuff between chapters, actually. . . Kind of have one idea of how I want to approach handling things between chapters but there is a bit of a complication there that arose recently. I don't know, I still have about a month to figure it out, but we'll see.

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3rd Sep 2013, 3:13 AM

Adam C.

Doing the line-art for this, me and Martin were both really surprised the girls' conversation with Day only lasted two pages. We both thought it was longer. He does turn up later in the chapter so think that might be the reason. Well, that and the episode has a ton of dialog.

So yeah, with that last bit, not much for me to say on this. Sadly we don't get a scene where Candice regresses Sareena and Misty back into little kids to get back out through the Daycare. This is kinda at that point where the Chapter just needed to end.

Weird to think, with this chapter winding down, I was all for canceling the comic to keep WaR on a two-a-week schedule. Still my preference, but sorta neat to think we kept going and got this story out of it.

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3rd Sep 2013, 1:43 PM

Wolfintina

Word gets around fast if Day has already heard about White Noise and are we going back to Jason and Marina on Saturday?

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3rd Sep 2013, 4:21 PM

Martin F.

We're getting back to Jason, though Marina isn't with him. But yeah, given how fast cellphones and the Internet and the like make news get around now, probably all the faster thirteen years from now.

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