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A Time For Play, Page 28

posted 23rd Sep 2013, 11:00 PM

A Time For Play, Page 28
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23rd Sep 2013, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

First of all, if you read Wright as Rayne - keep the name Dunning Monroe in mind. That's going to be important.

That out of the way, let's talk about Black Princess! Pretty happy with this one, if only because I generally find Day to be quite a bit of fun to write for so far. Hopefully everyone enjoys reading what there's been of him so far, even if it's not been a lot.

This is the last time he shows up in the chapter, though. We still have two pages to go, and each of them will be jumping around a bit. The reason for that will probably quickly become clear once the next chapter starts, though it ties into what Sareena and Misty were saying about all of the threats they're having to deal with right now.

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24th Sep 2013, 12:03 AM

Adam C.

Yeah, Day is really cool; fun to read about and fun to draw. I really hope next time he shows up he's not on the monitor, or is at least doing something interesting on the monitor, like having his back lit so you can't see his face or something.
"What's with this new look?"
"Just looks cool. Plus I can't find my mask."

Really kinda put Mustache guy in because I don't do much with facial hair in this comic and figured I should try it. It does look strange, but I think it's because mustaches look weird unless you're either living in the 1970s or a porn star. I also like that pale guy with the dark hair. Eh.

Weird; two more pages in this chapter and only remember one of them offhand.

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25th Sep 2013, 6:42 AM

Martin F.

Y'know, I'm going to go ahead and throw in the detail that I've figured out what I'm going to do with Day the next time he shows up. It should be fun.

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24th Sep 2013, 12:13 AM

Wolfintina

Oh, sure scare your employees with the thought that you can slip in and spy on them at any time, and I see you guys changed the background image, I think this one works much better than the old one.

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25th Sep 2013, 6:48 AM

Martin F.

Glad you think so. Had to play around with it a fair bit but happy with the end result on that.

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