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The Sunset Princess, Page 2

posted 21st Oct 2013, 11:00 PM

The Sunset Princess, Page 2
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21st Oct 2013, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Eheh... Martin had to edit this page just now to cover up a mistake on my part. ^^ Betcha you can't even spot where it is.

Anyway, yeah... It's really weird working with Sareena's bothers since I kinda recognize them by their traits or outfits instead of their names. This page required a lot of "wait, who's what?" questions to Martin.

Did enjoy their outfits, though. All various kinds of teacher styles present.

Also, one thing you're gonna notice a lot in this chapter are the cameos. Not just normal ones like Laura, Alex, and Alex in the bottom panel, but also present are Asuna from Negima (she's gotten a haircut), and student versions of Yukari and Nyamo. The next pages are even more blatant about it.

Y'know what? Calling it here; if any readers have schoolgirl-characters you want to see in any of the classroom scenes, list 'em now and I'll see what I can do. ^^ Heck, one of the future pages has an absolute ton of them, so they might already be there.

..... No OCs, please.

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21st Oct 2013, 11:34 PM

Martin F.

Yeah, had to scramble in a last minute fix for something. See if you can spot what, will hint it has to do with the dialogue.

Also, hey, almost all of the Black clan together! No sign of Walden, but he'll be showing up soon to complete the set. Be seeing a decent bit of the group as a whole as the chapter goes, though so far in what I've written I'll say it's mostly been on Walden and Noland. Those are probably the ones most cheated so far though, so appropriate I suppose that they get some more screentime. Incidentally, going to try and have one of the DeviantArt fillers soon give some more background on the siblings and try to give a more clear idea of who they all are for reference sake. We won't be having that this weekend though, since the cover for chapter ten of WaR will be going up instead.

Speaking of Sareena's brothers, I particularly like how Edward came out here. I tried to write him back in chapter one, which is how we'll largely be seeing him, as sort of weird and kind of menacing to be around despite being friendly, and he kind of has that look to him. Like the sort of guy you'd be really uncomfortable to spend too much time around.

Anyway, hope everyone enjoys and see you for page three next week!

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22nd Oct 2013, 12:06 AM

Wolfintina

Okay I have no idea what is going on right now, and as for schoolgirl-characters I like the ones from the Yu-Gi-Oh series and Case Closed.

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22nd Oct 2013, 2:39 AM

Adam C.

I said it in the last page, "Now something completely different."

But yeah, I can work with Case Closed. Thinking like Rachel or Amy?

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22nd Oct 2013, 3:57 PM

Wolfintina

I like both Rachel and Amy, so either one or both is fine with me.

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