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The Sunset Princess, Page 7

posted 19th Nov 2013, 12:00 AM

The Sunset Princess, Page 7
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19th Nov 2013, 12:00 AM

Martin F.

Weird thing, noticed we completely missed coloring Misty's face in one panel. Did that in Paint just kind of expecting it to be decent, but don't think it's at all noticeable which it is. Pleasant surprise there. Did a little bit of extra cleaning up on it in doing that.

That being said, not sure what all I have to say on this page; sort of a case where the conversation at hand is relevant and has its purpose, but there isn't directly much that'll be coming from it.

Heh. Will say on that homework comment by Alex, Adam's response was that he'll have to have that pointed out in Blues sometime. Then again, that'd require them to go to class at some point; sort of funny when you think about how BP starring two working adults has had more time spent in a classroom than a comic about a bunch of gradeschoolers, huh?

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19th Nov 2013, 12:35 AM

Adam C.

What comment homework what now what? Oh, right, that.... Yeah, I actually blur through dialog sometimes or forget it immediately after the page is done. It's easy when it's just "copy, paste, format, balloon, arrow." Dialog is usually the dullest part of a page and since the Manga Studio transition, I just put it off.

But yeah, like I mentioned, showing a classroom scene in Blues would mean a huge head count and... Yeah, not very eager to do it. Not like I don't find plenty of excuses to show the student body anyway.

Ughhh... So weirdly tired as I type this and done barely anything all day. Not picking up is I just spotted a pretty embarrassing flaw in the second panel.... Eh, aw, well.

Dorothy's shirt.... Hoping to drop a few other hints similar to that, but will have to see when next she shows up. About all I got. ^^

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19th Nov 2013, 1:10 AM

Wolfintina

The kids have mentioned homework before even though there has never been a classroom scene, and this chapter is still barely making any sense.

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