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The Sunset Princess, Page 10

posted 10th Dec 2013, 12:00 AM

The Sunset Princess, Page 10
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10th Dec 2013, 12:00 AM

Martin F.

Hey, now we're to Noland! Yeah, in writing this chapter I've sort of wanted to put the focus largely on the ones of Sareena's siblings we haven't seen too much of or haven't seen in awhile, so naturally I decided to give him a little bit of spotlight since he's not really shown up since the first chapter.

Anyway, pretty happy with this page. I like how sort of touchy Noland is here, think it kind of adds to the sense of closeness of the scene. Particularly since while I've not had too much of a chance to show it so far I see him being the main sibling that Sareena looks up to.

Anyway, if you missed it we put up a little something extra this weekend since we weren't able to put up the bonus page. We'll try and make up for that down the line, but for the time being, thank you for reading and be sure to come by again next week!

Oh, and be sure to wish Abe (and me, since we share one) a belated happy birthday. It was on Sunday.

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10th Dec 2013, 12:38 AM

Adam C.

Happy Birthday, Martin. ^^ Said it yesterday but wanted to say it again.

Sareena came out really adorable here; like moreso than I'd have expected. ^^ Really enjoyed doing that aspect of it, imagine it probably comes out when she's hanging out with her big brothers.

I am a little weirded out with how the courtyard here went from having a lot of students walking around to suddenly being empty, though.

Bad news is that one of my wisdom teeth has ended up cracked or infected or something and will probably need to come out. After my finals, of course. Until then I've got a throbbing, aching chunk of bone in my mouth that's positioned in a way that I can't help but put pressure on it every time I bite down.

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13th Dec 2013, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

Heh, appreciate it. But yeah, I had mine taken out... Probably at least six or seven years ago myself.

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10th Dec 2013, 12:55 AM

Wolfintina

Happy belated birthday Martin and Abe. Noland's hair is shorter than it was in his first appearance, and I had my wisdom teeth removed years ago.

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