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The Sunset Princess, Page 20

posted 8th Feb 2014, 12:00 AM

The Sunset Princess, Page 20
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8th Feb 2014, 12:00 AM

Martin F.

I have to admit, I'm really concerned this multiple White Noises with normal outfits visual is going to come off as really stupid.

Personally it does at least look okay to me, so there is that. So, clearly something is amiss here, as if that wasn't already obvious. We're not quite done with this part of the story yet, but we are coming up on sort of the climax of the chapter. Ten pages left to come.

Not sure what all I really have to say on this one though, is mostly just a transition page between the last one and the next one. Still, I am happy with it.

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8th Feb 2014, 2:18 AM

Adam C.

I think it came off as sorta creepy. ^^ It anything, more worried about that window looking Narmy. I would say I got inspiration from the Chaos Vortex in Kid Icarus for the eyes, but really I was just lazy and wanted something creepy but quick to do.

Either way, very happy with the effect. White Noise's mask is fairly creepy and distinct, one reason I always love drawing the character.

Originally when doing the middle panel, I drew Sareena as.... Nnn... Damnit, can I say that without spoiling anything? Martin's in bed so... Hm. Shit.

Either way, very happy with the last two panels in particular. Straight-on profile is something I went a long time without using but seems to be coming up a fair bit now. Think it's progressing fairly with how it's been drawn and very happy that a shot of someone running to the camera came out that good.

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8th Feb 2014, 7:14 AM

Martin F.

Hey, just a heads up, it occurred to me that BP's third anniversary is on Friday. Don't worry, the remaining hook on the year three preview will be resolved soon, just a few weeks late. Not the months-long wait WaR has had to go through with with Arc, I assure you.

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8th Feb 2014, 2:59 AM

Wolfintina

Things have definitely taken a turn for the stranger, what's going to happen when she finds Misty.

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