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The Sunset Princess, Page 21

posted 11th Feb 2014, 12:00 AM

The Sunset Princess, Page 21
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view Martin F.'s profile

11th Feb 2014, 12:00 AM

Martin F.

I have to admit, the next couple of pages, especially the next one, feel a little awkward to me. Partially on purpose, but just a heads-up.

So, Dorothy and Alex are back in play on things! I sort of mean to have them more present through this chapter than they've kind of wound up being, but all the same, think it's still plenty clear that something weird's going on with them. If only for how they're showing up together like this.

Been really looking forward to some of the pages coming up soon, it bares mentioning. We are nearing the climax of the chapter and I'm hoping everyone enjoys it since I've had it in mind for a long while.

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11th Feb 2014, 12:34 AM

Adam C.

Nnn..... I dunno, get the feeling the awkwardness might be from me; been feeling a touch disjointed from the comic work with the new semester in swing, and I've felt a bit disconnected and distracted from the BP scripts in general.

Kinda running out of shit to say here otherwise. Transitional page, though high head count so I still had to put a fair amount of time into drawing it. Though a lot of heads were either people I draw all the time or White Noise so was fairly quick, at least.

Will say, I think I expected there to be another scene-break before the climax, otherwise I would've dressed Sareena differently. Outfit's grown on me, though.

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11th Feb 2014, 9:42 PM

Martin F.

Just remembered to mention, be sure and swing by Friday for the year four preview!

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11th Feb 2014, 12:38 AM

Wolfintina

This is getting interesting, can't wait to hear what the story is here.

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13th Feb 2014, 3:25 PM

Martin F.

Heh, we'll get some insight into that in the next page.

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