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The Sunset Princess, Page 22

posted 17th Feb 2014, 11:00 PM

The Sunset Princess, Page 22
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17th Feb 2014, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Lot of dialog in this one... Mostly trying to set the record straight in what's been going on. Anybody been lost between the start of the chapter and now?

What I really like about all this is that with all the crap these two have been through already, we don't know if this is actually true or just another twist in whatever freaky game they're wrapped up in. That continues from this point, really. They look suspicious, wouldn't it be great if they were telling the truth and these two murdered them or something?

Clocktower again... Yeah, going well, I think. Not much else to say.

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view Martin F.'s profile

17th Feb 2014, 11:19 PM

Martin F.

Not sure how much I have to say on this one, though like I said before, I feel kind of awkward about this one. Not as much as I did - I actually mentioned before I sent the script for this page to Adam that I felt really unsure about this one, and he ended up agreeing after reading it prompting me to tweak it a bit.

Still, part of it feeling weird is intentional, though it'll be a bit before I can really go into detail on that. Sort of makes talking about this sequence weird in general.

So, yeah, about all I've got on this one. Hopefully everyone likes this page, and next week's - things will be getting a bit more dynamic then.

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18th Feb 2014, 12:14 AM

Wolfintina

Okay, things just got even more confusing, this is making my head spin.

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view Martin F.'s profile

24th Feb 2014, 8:00 PM

Martin F.

Heh, hopefully it becomes a little more clear what's going on soon then.

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