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The Sunset Princess, Page 23

posted 24th Feb 2014, 11:00 PM

The Sunset Princess, Page 23
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24th Feb 2014, 11:00 PM

Martin F.

Nope, this chapter isn't weird at all.

The chapter's about to shift firmly into its climax, so if anyone has any remaining theories as to what's going on, now's the time to put them out there. Including as it relates to just what it is that's bugging Sareena - anyone want to take a guess at that?

Not sure outside of cryptic hints for the future what all I really have to pay on this page admittedly. Don't get too used to how Moon looks in this page - for the rest of the sequence she's colored a little differently than she is here. Looks a lot better there than here, here I wasn't entirely clear on what Adam was getting at with the way he did her part of the image files so it wound up sort of weird.

Incidentally, figure this'd be a good page to go ahead and mention - while some of the dialogue might help indicate this, all the same, if this page and the last one seem like what's being presented as what they need to do is too easy, that's because it is.

Oh, and yes, Moon was the one speaking in gibberish earlier. Naturally she doesn't actually speak English, that was just for readers' benefit when we saw her earlier. I'll likely post the translations of all of her dialogue after the chapter ends. As for who the other speaker was... We'll get to that.

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25th Feb 2014, 12:20 AM

Adam C.

..... Damn, I just realized the "Moon doesn't speak English" thing is going to be a problem for something I've got planned in Blues. .... Ah, well, can probably handwave it pretty easily. Won't be fr years anyway.

Speaking of easy to do, this page was pretty simple. I do really love the whitespace with that little piece of land in the distance. While easy to do, think it's also a genuinely striking image.

Not too much else to say here. The chapter's still got plenty of good stuff coming.

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25th Feb 2014, 12:37 AM

Wolfintina

This chapter is giving me a headache, it keeps jumping from one extreme to another, but if want theories I've been wondering if the blurred image is the Shadow King.

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28th Feb 2014, 9:05 PM

Martin F.

Heh, interesting theory. You'll get the answer soon.

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