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The Black Princess... On Ice!, Page 6

posted 9th Jun 2014, 11:00 PM

The Black Princess... On Ice!, Page 6
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9th Jun 2014, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

This page had more than one things narrowly go wrong with it. Meant to sign it up after I got home from class but was dead tired and couldn't manage it. Only getting to it now, thirty minutes before it's set to go up.

Still, shame we won't be seeing the Smids for a while, rather liked them. Got a lot of other new stuff on the horizon though that we're hoping you'll enjoy. Not a whole lot else to say, page is pretty simple. Martin? ^^

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9th Jun 2014, 11:07 PM

Martin F.

I'm back, baby! Woo!

Yeah, I actually e-mailed some comments to Adam earlier on this one, but I decided not to post them in favor of typing them up again, seeing as those were done on a cellphone without actually being able to see the page at the time.

Actually, pretty nearly averted disaster on this page myself - I colored the page the other night and sent it to Adam to finish up... but it turned out that I sent the wrong copy of the page. I did at least get the chance to send the proper one the next day.

So, Man of the Times! That's the big thing here. Yeah, he would be the character who was planned to be introduced way later. We will meet him in the next page, I think he'll make a pretty immediate impact on readers. He isn't in this chapter for long but I think he'll make an impression.

Incidentally, for those wondering, the stuff with Misty helping to break into the Monroes' house starts in Wright as Rayne next Monday. It's really not that relevant to what's going on in BP though so it isn't crucial reading, and Misty mostly has kind of a supporting role. If you've wanted to see her and Power interact you get to see it, though.

This chapter has a lot of Sareena and Misty being mocked for questionable decisions of theirs so far, actually. There's more of that to come later.

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9th Jun 2014, 11:17 PM

Wolfintina

So glad you're back Martin we missed you, can't wait to see what the Man of Times looks like and Misty sure seems lax about helping Alex break into the Monroes' house.

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