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The Fast Life, Page 10

posted 3rd Feb 2015, 12:00 AM

The Fast Life, Page 10
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3rd Feb 2015, 12:00 AM

Martin F.

Obvious lead-in for the 300th page is obvious. Three pages away, that; in the meantime we'll be cutting away in the next page. In general with this chapter don't get used to a scene lasting for too long. Might be kind of a mistake actually since the next chapter will be a bit similar in that regard just by nature of its format.

Anyway, yeah, pretty happy with this one. If nothing else for those magic effects - played around with some new things to make them look a bit more mysterious and dynamic. Really happy with how that aspect of things came out, and it's fairly quick to do to boot.

Do kind of wish the last panel was done a bit differently, though. Sareena's supposed to be fainting there or on the verge of it, would kind of prefer a more dramatic swoon sort of look to it. Eh, hindsight.

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3rd Feb 2015, 2:13 AM

Adam C.

SHIT! That would've been way better! Sareena faints like Rarity! ^^

But yeah, magic effects just look great here. ^^ Almost like water colors. Especially like where Sareena shoves her hand into the car door. Sadly, I think that's all I got to say. Art mostly speaks for itself and never been crazy-good at commenting on BP anyway. ^^

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3rd Feb 2015, 2:20 AM

Wolfintina

Whoa what just happened, this is intense.

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