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The Fast Life, Page 13

posted 24th Feb 2015, 12:00 AM

The Fast Life, Page 13
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24th Feb 2015, 12:00 AM

Adam C.

300th Page, bitches! WOOO! ^^

So yeah, something of a twist, here. As always, we try and work in something memorable at the 50-page points, and think this more than qualifies. What does this mean for the future? We'll have to see.

Sadly, my favorite bit is Brick fixing his hair and playing around in the background. Wish I could take credit for that but it was all Martin. Outlined in the script. ^^

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24th Feb 2015, 12:06 AM

Martin F.

Don't worry, we won't be waiting until page 350 to touch more on this whole Dorothy situation. Actually won't be going into it much in this chapter, but it'll come up in... What I guess is the next one. I dunno, plans are kind of up in the air right now, thought about adding a mini-chapter between this one and the next. Still, back to it soon, and of course not completely done with it in this chapter, just not the focus.

Yeah, plan has always been to have that happen in this fight and just turn it into Brick vs. Misty, just the way it worked out it was easy to stretch it to page 300 so I opted to do that. By proper pacing probably should've just happened right after then changed scenes there, but come on, this was so close to 300 why wouldn't I save it for that?

And yeah, had to write in that joke with Brick in the script. Just seemed like a good way to show what a vain douche he is in just a little, funny way.

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24th Feb 2015, 12:11 AM

Wolfintina

Wow Dorothy talk about lousy timing, this is an interesting twist, looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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