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The Fast Life, Page 24

posted 11th May 2015, 11:00 PM

The Fast Life, Page 24
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11th May 2015, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Pretty scatter-brained so dunno how much I'll have to say.

Y'know, after we wild-manned up Paxton a good deal he started looking like Dennis Leary. Weird. I wonder if Leary enjoys random tacklings.

Y'know, when the comic started I got the feeling Sareena was gonna be the main hero and Misty was kinda-sorta her sidekick. As the comic goes on I'm starting to think that, if anything, Misty is the butt-kicking main hero and Sareena's the goofy sidekick to her. Misty seems to have a lot more skill and better idea of what she's doing, after all....

I DO really like the idea on that suit having a few additional features, especially the communicator. That said, I wouldn't be surprised if it also had some kind of tracking device given Misty's a spy and it was a gift from her enemy.

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11th May 2015, 11:41 PM

Martin F.

Hey, look, Misfile's real main character, a close-up of the sky, decided to drop in!

Yeah, actually, I need to figure out a better way to do clouds. Because of how MS always has an outline around something like that regardless of the colors used, it tends to always look weird. Maybe I should just start painting in the clouds myself with the design brush or something, I dunno.

Anyway, yeah, pretty happy with this page on the whole but not sure how much I've really got to say about it. Wanted to get pretty dynamic with Paxton right from the get-go, though.

And hey, look, now we've seen at least two members of the Patriot Initiative besides the leader can talk! I think only one more of them does in this scene but still, do want to work to show the group's members do have their own quirks and personalities. Don't want to sink a huge amount of time into them or really give them a full spotlight chapter or anything but going to want to show them off and work them into things when I can.

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11th May 2015, 11:47 PM

Wolfintina

Well this is certainly interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.

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