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The Fast Life, Page 26

posted 25th May 2015, 11:00 PM

The Fast Life, Page 26
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25th May 2015, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Yeah, loved doing that T-Shirt. Figured, "Well, whatever clothes she gets would be generated by the suit and Day gave them the suit so..."

Yeah, Day is a character I really wanna see again just because I thought he was sorta fun. Plus I really, really love that mask he had. Speaking of, the cartoony mascot that's based off the mask actually came from a joke-page I did once where it's revealed Day is actually a sock-puppet. .... I'm dead serious.

My main complaint is that red-shades there is seemingly frozen in place between panels three and four. I meant for him to look like he's backing away but it looks like someone murdered him and had him stuffed, and the other PI members are wheeling him away on a pulley. What made it worse is he was also in the fifth panel too, but on seeing how it looked I erased him before I started prepping the page for coloring.

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25th May 2015, 11:54 PM

Martin F.

I really need to do something to define the abilities of Misty's suit - have shown off most of what it can do by now I'd think, and it's largely similar stuff to this sort of thing with a lot of focus on screwing with images and other things that'd be useful to stealth - but it's nice to have a present, public list of it's abilities so nothing feels too out of nowhere. Like how we put up something on DA awhile back showing off all of Sareena's main magical skills.

So yeah, all the build-up on the Patriot Initiative the past couple of chapters... ends with a peaceful talk about boundaries in an alleyway. Figure that's the end of it?

Nah, naturally have some more planned, though what exactly, you'll see. A couple of members put in a further appearance at the end of the chapter, but for now this is basically about it particularly as it relates to the group itself. They'll be in the next one though.

Not sure what else I've really got here. Chapter's actually starting to wind down, though with the schedule we have that's still like a month and a half away from actually being over. I need to pick up the pace on the scripts for the next chapter really, not actually got that many presently sitting in reserve. Though there'll be a bit of between-chapter filler anyway.

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26th May 2015, 12:05 AM

Wolfintina

Big talk coming from a fake hero, wonder what's going to happen next,

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