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Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 17

posted 18th Oct 2015, 11:00 PM

Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 17
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18th Oct 2015, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Brain feels like a pancake... Can't think straight... Nnnnng.... Really like Ozais' twirling and Paxton in general here, not sure what else to say. ^^

Paxton and Ozais are generally the funnest two characters to draw in this particular arc of the plot. Don't mind seeing more of the two of 'em.

Had to re-draw Fulton in the first and second panels.... Is a weird thing on that, but again, can't think straight so will leave it up to you guys to decide why.

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18th Oct 2015, 11:16 PM

Martin F.

Not sure what all I've got to say here myself. Fairly self-explanatory page really.

Actually in general this whole ballroom fight's not been giving me too much to comment on. Kind of weird, but sometimes you get a scene like that I guess.

Really liking the stuff with Paxton at least. He's a character who I've been figuring would be fun to write for and thus far he's proving me right.

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