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Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 18

posted 22nd Oct 2015, 11:00 PM

Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 18
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22nd Oct 2015, 11:00 PM

Adam C.

Yeah, hope you guys like, but not much to say here myself. Mostly because I'm really distracted at the moment. ^^ I like the touch of Paxton getting one last kick in as he's pulled off (wasn't my idea, was in the script).

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22nd Oct 2015, 11:14 PM

Martin F.

Not sure what all I've got to say here, but do rather like how the page came out.

Was picturing Ozias's sudden jump up looking a bit more dramatic and actiony, though, like him firing that just in the middle of rising or something. Still, minor complaint really.

Do like this page got to show off a bit more in the way of some character stuff, though. Like having Paxton being rather into beating on Ozias and still going at it even after being pulled off, and the various quips in the sixth panel. Yeah, rather happy with this one all in all.

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