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The Hidden Flame, Page 3

posted 8th Nov 2011, 12:00 AM

The Hidden Flame, Page 3
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8th Nov 2011, 12:00 AM

Adam C.

Submitting this late and got to go to class real soon, so kinda scarce on things to say. Did like the colorful disco look the criminal has, and we'll see more of that later.

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8th Nov 2011, 9:42 PM

Martin F.

Sorry about the lateness of my comments lately. Long story but basically boils down to usually not being able to do so at the time the pages go up.

Anyway, happy with this one but not a lot to say about it. We get to see Sareena and Misty chatting with their boss and out first look at our villain's face. Just occurred to me I haven't written in his name yet - I seem to be kind of bad about that, but at a good place in the scripts to put it in.

Anyway, Baile de Fuego for now. Originally I intended him as a solo act with a mask and not a lot of depth, but eventually I decided on this more glitzy, entourage-backed figure. Kind of funny - at one point was going to have the woman with him mostly do a hype job for him with every appearance, thus the reason for her being created, then that mostly dropped with her now mostly just providing back-up. Kinda started to take him in an Alberto del Rio-ish direction then didn't wind up rolling with it.

As for Hearst, we don't see a lot of her in this chapter - just one more page after this, and possibly again for the ending, but if she doesn't show back up then she will certainly be in the next chapter.

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