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The Hidden Flame, Page 6

posted 19th Nov 2011, 12:00 AM

The Hidden Flame, Page 6
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19th Nov 2011, 12:00 AM

Adam C.

Here we go.... If you were gonna give us some feedback, now'd be good. Very nervous about how this came out and was clearly my first time drawing a raining scene. Kinda pleased with it, but little doubt in my mind I couldn't do better if I knew how to draw.

Speaking of poor artwork, not sure if I can really carry this myself... While the script is solid, sometimes I'm just not good enough to pull off a page that has no dialog.

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20th Nov 2011, 10:53 PM

Martin F.

Not a lot to say on this one, but I think Adam did a good job with it. The rain was a last-minute addition - got forgotten about for a bit but was remembered eventually.

Yeah... Anyway, main body of this part of the story will start off with the next page, but thought this was needed for a transition. That sequence did come out kind of bloated, as a warning, but nothing too huge.

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