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The Hidden Flame, Page 13

posted 13th Dec 2011, 12:00 AM

The Hidden Flame, Page 13
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13th Dec 2011, 12:00 AM

Adam C.

Not much to say on this one for me. The artwork isn't particularly good, I don't think. Things like Sareena's spells seem like they were made with Abe's drawing style in mind, since it looks really bland when I do it.

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13th Dec 2011, 7:32 PM

Martin F.

Eh, I think this one looks decent myself. Not much to the actual content, though - mostly it just serves to get the mooks out of the way for a bit.

Writing this fight scene I was kind of surprised at just how long it was turning out. It wound up pretty slow-paced, which I guess is good for a change of pace but I tend to picture Ozias as striking very quickly so it didn't wind up really working out as I intended. Hopefully people will continue to enjoy, though.

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