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The Hidden Flame, Page 14

posted 17th Dec 2011, 12:00 AM

The Hidden Flame, Page 14
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17th Dec 2011, 12:00 AM

Adam C.

Now this one got some good colors. Not much standing out about it besides that.

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17th Dec 2011, 12:43 AM

Martin F.

Pages like this kind of confuse the issue on whether Ozias or Lara's the one who's in charge exactly. Throughout the chapter it seems to kind of vary - was still sort of hammering out the details and certainties. Think I've got a good hang on it moving forward that doesn't cause any issues, though.

Not much else to say on this one. Coloring looks alright but nothing really new to it. Still, definitely happy with this one.

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